Without you

by Ella   May 26, 2006


You make me weak in the knees
to my heart you hold the keys
everything has finally ceased
it's time now for you and me

you make me feel breathless
life before you was a complete mess
hold me close and gently caress
knowing you're here takes away the stress

without you my heart is torn
without you i'd be forlorn
without you i could not say
where on earth would i be today

Dedicated to my fiance, which i love so much...plz comment.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    Definitely a great poem. I give it a 5/5, b/c it's about the closest to perfect I'm going to find! :)
    PV

  • 17 years ago

    by RadianceInReverse

    WOW Ella I love how you write...sometimes i wonder who was the first to write..because you just amaze me..ne way this poem is beautiful...Love Ya and Will...Joclyn

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