Comments : The Sweetest Thing That Exist

  • 14 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl l0t 0f em0ti0n in this p0em
    beautifully written. great use 0f w0rds.

    l0ve always
    d0ra

  • 14 years ago

    by patrick125

    Wow ash, this is realy great and i can tell you put a lot of emotion into this one. Exelent job.

  • 14 years ago

    by Jennifer

    WOW....this poem REALLY hit me because I can 100% relate to it, I love all the emtion that its overflowing with, the word usage it also very good, 5/5 from me....great job, once again I lOVED IT!!!
    always jennifer

  • 14 years ago

    by donna

    What a wonderful poem.. gonna go and see if you have any more i can read.. really enjoyed this 1 xx

  • 14 years ago

    by Mat

    Well damn!
    It's been a while since I've read your stuff, forgot how good it was...
    keep it up. I need something to read :-P

    oh and just for the record....

    I hatE iT wHEn ppL tAkl lYkE thIs

  • 14 years ago

    by Lauren

    I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Made me teary

  • 14 years ago

    by ~5*seconds*ago~

    Thoughts about what the further my hold
    I think you meant Thoughts about what the future may hold?? but im not sure...other then that it was really good! 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Its was awesome, and thats one word i only use when i mean it. it was sweet and loving and i think it was well written.
    keep writing
    xxxxx

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael Mantione

    Wow I don't normally comment on love poems...(Mostly because it logs me out when I click on one.) But this is a very deep poem I really enjoyed reading it and I definitely think you should enter it. Its a great poem. 5.5

    Sincerely †Michael†

  • 14 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow this is really good. i like it a lot. its really sweet and beautiful. keep writing 5/5

  • Wow, all i can say is it was beautiful, well written and with a lot of heart, thanks for the comment.

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  • 14 years ago

    by ~* gifted little fallen~*

    This is an excelent write :D and yeah i get what ur saing lol im kinda going through the same thing and its a crazy love i tell yeah. but i think its true ;) u deserve eachother... stick it through

  • 14 years ago

    by ratchild666

    This is really beautiful and very clever. great poem xx

  • 14 years ago

    by Emma

    Awww...That was really sweet...it had a great flow...which made it easy to read...i loved it...great write...
    Emma 5/5

  • Thank you for commenting on my poem. This is so sweet. I think this excellent. 5/5 Keep up the good work. It's extraordinary.

    Heather
    xoxox

  • 14 years ago

    by Robyn

    I really liked this poem good work keep it up and thanks for the comment :)
    xoxo take care
    robyn

  • 14 years ago

    by Darien

    This was a really good poem. Very sweet and romantic. Love poems are great to read, because it makes people smile, and pours happiness into their heart. This is a good poem, and you should enter this into a contest.

    One thing, and I'm being honest. The title is weak. Please change the title.
    It's grammatically incorrerct. If you must, "The Sweet(no 's') Things That Exist(no 's')" every new word should be in CAPS. To give it a better effect of a title.

  • 14 years ago

    by MemoirsOfMe

    This was truely beautiful. Your expressions and use of metaphors made it unique, and easy to relate to. Wonderful! 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Lithium

    That is beautiful...i dont think i have read ur work but for this first piece it is absolutly fantasic great rhymes and words keep it up xox me

  • 14 years ago

    by aaron 1 remo

    Brilliant poem! the structure was very rigid which made the poem seem to flow on efortlessly. Good job keep it up
    Aaron (remo)