WOW....this poem REALLY hit me because I can 100% relate to it, I love all the emtion that its overflowing with, the word usage it also very good, 5/5 from me....great job, once again I lOVED IT!!!
Wow I don't normally comment on love poems...(Mostly because it logs me out when I click on one.) But this is a very deep poem I really enjoyed reading it and I definitely think you should enter it. Its a great poem. 5.5
This was a really good poem. Very sweet and romantic. Love poems are great to read, because it makes people smile, and pours happiness into their heart. This is a good poem, and you should enter this into a contest.
One thing, and I'm being honest. The title is weak. Please change the title.
It's grammatically incorrerct. If you must, "The Sweet(no 's') Things That Exist(no 's')" every new word should be in CAPS. To give it a better effect of a title.