Very very good. very good rythme. it seem that there's mor. keep writing:)

This is a beautiful poem, and the message is lovely and sad. Good job! 5/5

First I'd like to say I'm really sorry for the loss. A really good poem though. It was a little short, But that doesn't matter. It was really well done. Keep it up =] 5/5

`Taleee

The strongest element of this poem, as it attempted neither rhyme nor rhythm, was the repitition in the beginning stanzas. I thought the repitition compounded the emotions in the piece, making it very powerful.

Aww J.Lau, that is such a sad story, but a beautiful write. Loosing someone close is always hard. Such a heartfelt write. Thanks.

It's a wonderful non-rhyme poem. Well-written

Awww.. That was so sad.. very good though! I hope you're okay. Great job.

First of all, i'm really sorry for your loss...
you've done a great job writing this poem, it's very sad, but beautiful & well written. good job..
rob

Wow.. that really hit home. I lost my step dad to cancer and now we think my mom might have breast cancer. I'm really sorry about your aunt. But you did a great job on this poem. It was very sad and heartfelt. The second stanza was my favorite. Great job on this. 5/5 Stay strong :)

Aw wow! This was so sad. I'm so sorry for your loss.

I thought it was a great poem though. I noticed aswell that with each stanza {except for the last one} you repeated the same word at the start of each line except for the last line. Thought it was good. Keep it up! 5/5

J --
I think its terrific that you`ve gone out of your way to write a poem for your late aunt. I bet you that, even though she can`t tell you, she loved it. =D I think the flow throughout the poem was great. I also liked the repition of phrases on the first three lines of the first three stanzas. -- it added a nice twist that most people don`t think to include in their work. Great job, 5/5
Much thanks for your comment on my song. =D

Samantha Hollywood

I really liked this poem!! My aunt just passed a month ago from heart failure, so it reminded me alot of my uncle right now!! 5/5!! The flow was great!!! Great Job 5/5!!

Very sad, a nice simple touching poem

Great poem. It made me think about those I'd lost, and cheered me a little. Excellently written.

Peace. [Sole]

Oh I am so sorry to hear about your Aunt..you wrote a beautiful distribution to her though! May God be with you and your family! Beautiful write!
R.I.P Helen..I hate reading these poems they make me sad..yet it was nicely written!
Krissey

Good poem. Its really sad and shows alot of emotion... Great poems. Keep writing!! 5/5

~Shae

This is such a touching poem about a loss in the family. you did very well at capturing emotions and the character of the poem. 5/5