I think the reader is evoked by empathy in this read. The story format of poetry is captavating.
The flowa was great only 1 thing I would suggest (and thisis just my opinion) is that for this stanza:
I never get the chance to tell
What she is thinking, felling
As she hurries along
Her life is a blur of passing shadows
No where to belong
It was only 5 lines long while the other stanzas are 6. The rhyme flow I felt was interrupted judt for tht 1 stanza.
I was trying to think of a suggestion but nothing comes to mind...sorry I honestly tried but this is not m,y style so I found it hard to suggest anything.

*oh jus a side not I think in the same stanza you meant feeling, instead of felling...possibly??

All in all it was a fantastic write!!

Lol, I just thought it was funny, you wrote Woman in the Mirrow on the forum, and I was like, a woman in a fish? Wtf?.. haha, oh man.. anyways..

This was a really sad poem, and you put a lot of thought and emotion into it. Great job.

I think this poem had so much emotion put into it..i loved it:):)...Its soo cool how u can take all that emotion and put it on paper so beautifully:):)

Wow amazingly beautiful poem your flow was really good there were i think a couple misspelled words like felling maybe feeling or something i dunno but great job it was a truely sad but beautiful poem.

Awesome poem the flow was great!!!

Please r/r/c rose colored glasses, here i am, and love

Awesome Poem. Make sure to check out mine I'll give u a 5!

*sniff* *tears* this one is really sad... somehow it gives me a sense of grief and being helpless not being able to comfort the woman in the mirror! Itz really gud!!

Shaylee -- I think this was a good poem. Your rhyming worked out really well. Some of your rhythems flowed a little unsmoothly.. but overall, it was great! I liked it. Keep it up!!

Samantha Hollywood

Wow, great work. I really loved this i actually thought i was i knew the woman i was reading about. It's kind of a sad story though, but it was really well written.

Great work

--Steph

Wow!! I loved this poem!! Great job!! I can truly relate!! I loved the rythmn, and the ryhmes!! 5/5

Wow....amazing poem---It held so much emotion and really made me think. It was really sad and powerful on a level I cant even describe-Great write! 5/5

Really really long but soooo worth readong. it's brilliant. i was really drawn in. rock on!

What sucks about todays day and age is that sadly, everyone will go through this

This was so sad, but very well written you make your readers relate to what your saying and feel the pain and agony in your writing!! Your descriptions were great in this poem and I'm def. giving you a 5!!

"Trys" should be "tries".
One of my biggest pet peeves with this site is since it's online people have a tendency to do things they would do online, like not capitalize "i" to "I" and stuff like that. :P

However, it's a very good poem. For quite a while you have no idea what the message is, and then by the end you wrap it up very nicely and it starts to make sense. I like it a lot.