Your Poems Are Crappy

by Jesus   May 30, 2006


Your poems are crappy,
You're not very snappy,
Your poems are boring,
You're having me snoring,
You're very depressing,
An EMO, I'm guessing...

Your hairdo is weird,
You don't have a beard,
I'm guessing you're gay,
If so, go away...

*This is a short poem, I guess... It's lame you so don't rate it. Thanks.

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  • 17 years ago

    by x WatCh The Tears FaLl x

    ...hey ill send u a dollar to go get a life u judge ppls work but u dont hav any ...doesnt that make sense cuz ur sooo INVOLVED wit poetry and actually know the [meaning] of it that u can say it o yea ... but hunt lemmie tell u somethin u talk crap about it like its funny HA! but ur writtin half as$ sh!t and u cant bak up what u say whoaaa..... such a comedian

  • 17 years ago

    by Jesus

    Thanks a lot, everyone. Appreciate the comments.

  • 17 years ago

    by StephanieH

    Effin best poem eva!! PSHH YAA lmao. kidding u need work. lots of work.. as a matter of fact. don't bother writing. lmao luv ya rey.hah.

  • 17 years ago

    by StephanieH

    Ya, thanx for the comment u A-hole, your poem suckED.. and i mean SUCKEDDDD lol. jpjp..even tho it did..

  • 17 years ago

    by StephanieH

    Okay, your retarded Rey.. you suck at written poems, I know i know..it's like your dream and all, but just give up, i can tell you're not going to be going too far =] hehe!