Holocaust

by krissy   May 30, 2006


Sweat rolls down my face
I look up to see no clouds no rain
Im trapped here
There is no escape
Why cant i leave?
Why cant i just run away?
I feel as if my life is coming to an end
With no one to hear me
With no way out im stuck

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  • 19 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    This is only a suggestion (you don't have to do it) but to me poems get more feeling if they rhyme i mean it's alright to do free verse but i still say it gets more meaning if it rhymes. Especially sad poems. Don't get me wrong I liked your poem but i think it needs to be deeper.

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