The Guys In my Life

by holly   May 30, 2006


All day i stare at you and at night i dream of your beautiful face
your the love of my life and the guy I'm never gonna get
just friends is ok ,cause it means a hug each day
but ill always love you no matter what life puts me through
so stay my friend cause i cant live without you
and i only wish you felt the same
You are my DREAM BOY always and forever

A guy with some problems, you are absolutely crazy
but i love you to bits and ill always be there for you
ill do all i can to help and ill love you for all time
sure I've had some fantasies of you and me together
but that's no what i really want
i just love the way you jokingly hit on me
your younger and together we will never be
but the best of friends is fine with me!
ill be there for you and you'll be here for me
You and me i can see will stay friends for years to come
You are such a great FRIEND

Your my coach and friend, 100 per cent hottie
if you didn't have a girlfriend
i might actually have a chance
i dream of us together every night and every day
your the one i tell my friends about
I draw love hearts round your name
giggling about you, at every single sleep over,
teasing comments and suggestive looks from friends whenever we are together
it may not ever happen but you are my CRUSH

Like my older brother i love you to bits
your funny and cool, i respect you a heap
my leader, my friend, my inspiration, my counselor
thanks for guiding me and being there to help
i don't know what id do without you there to laugh
your the older BROTHER i never had, the one i admire

We've been friend since the start our families are friends
our dads worked together
and though you moved away, we've kept in contact
we've been friends for so long
i remember the dumbest things you've done
we've been "engaged" since we were 5
and plan to have 8 kids
you laugh at me and i laugh at you
i love you but not in the way that i get jealous of any other girl
Your my LONG-TIME FRIEND

At 3 years of age you the sweetest guy i know
around you i can be who i want to be
i can be crazy or stupid and crawl on the floor
your accepting of everything and love me how i am
with you there's no pressure just pointless fun
i love the way you slip that little hand into mine
the way you love to hug and the way you misbehave but always with a grin
my little sunday COMPANION

Always there and always love me
when im sad, when i'm im cross
you love me and you care
no matter what i do
your always on my side
you tell the lamest jokes
and do such stupid things
you wear such daggy clothes
but always i will love you each and every day
cause you are my one and only DAD

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    "your the love of my life and the guy I'm never gonna get"
    you're, not 'your'
    ~~~
    "but ill always love you no matter what life puts me through
    so stay my friend cause i cant live without you"
    "but i love you to bits and ill always be there for you
    ill do all i can to help and ill love you for all time"
    I'll, can't
    ~~~
    "Andy, your my netball coach and friend, 100 per cent hottie"
    "your funny and cool, i respect you a heap"
    "your younger and together we will never be"
    you're, not 'your'
    ~~~
    "but that's no what i really want"
    'not', not 'no'
    ~~~
    Meh, nevermind. Needless to say, there are plenty of grammatical corrections for you to make, and I think it would actually make a slight difference.

    As far as the content of the poem goes, I really enjoyed the attention to personal details and the unobtrusive rhyming.

  • 17 years ago

    by Navy SweetHeart

    That poem is great... still i think your other poem was better... you are very talented.... you write amazing...

  • 17 years ago

    by Summer

    Great poem, the only reason it didnt get a 5 is because it it flowed in some places and others it didn't. Another thing I thought would make the poem better was instead of having the names at the top (almost like the name of the poem) including it in a line would help the flow some.