by Jason May 30, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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You make me feel left right out of view |
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Very sad!! and keep up the good work! you can feel the pain you express!! |
by stargirl49
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Awesome job, jason!! i know the feeling well. keep up the great work!! |
by Mona S
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Very touching, Jason!! It's a poem we can all relate to sometime in our lives and you expressed the pain well. |
by Alex
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This would make a beautiful song, the last part being the chorus. love your poetry |