Tombstones

by linzi   Jun 1, 2006


Tombstones
covered in moss
grieving families
mourn their loss
solemn husbands
with crying wives
ask ' what sort of god
would take these lives'
flowers in vases
are starting to wilt
put there by people
driven with guilt
everyone dies
the good and the bad
fathers mothers children
happy or sad
for those still living
life goes on
just never forget
the ones who are gone

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  • 17 years ago

    by XxCount bodies like sheep to the rhythm of a war drumxX

    OMG!!! I agree with Rachel..I wouldn't change anything about this. this is a very nice poem. great rythme. great use of words. it's just great!!!

    (thanks for your comment)

  • 17 years ago

    by ŘÅÇĦ♥

    WOW- That was awesome and I wouldn't change NETHING! I loved it! keep it up and post some more!!!

    Rach ♥

  • 17 years ago

    by Polly

    WOW! I love this soooo much. I love the layout you have put it in, the short lines give a great effect. And the rhythm and flow is great! Wow 5/5, keep writing.
    - Polly x

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