Cryptic End

by Jamie   Jun 1, 2006


Try distractions to lure these attractions
Pain follows his delayed reactions
He is nothing but he's got you enslaved
His hypnotic wasteland has you encaged
You go back cause you like what you tasted
You adore how potential gets wasted

The fatalities have you begging for closure
Begging for mercy comfort he will ensure
Solemn and fragile he began to dominate
Start of dysfunction you love the more you hate
And it's hard to say where you lost control
But it's for sure, too unsure to let go

He is devious or at least there's a suspicion
Broke down, and given, full force submission
Lost within walls, nowhere you will be found
Too thick the chains with which you are tied down
Climatic bloodshed, complete fascination
Too numb to feel the burning trepidation

One thing I know, you have felt the affliction
One thing only, his malign traits can diction
Felt head on the safest collision
Cut trough your heart, misguided precision
Now we know that he stands for no one
But she sways him, now you've been outdone

He's all you want and you're going to capture
Undeniable love bleeds forth faithful rapture
Loves wrath complicates the fury you're caging
All you want is for him to feel what you're saying
So lie down face first feel the pressure on your head
Kicks you screaming, he doesn't care you had said
He is your master, you are his slave
You'll kill yourself if that's what it takes to behave
This fixed passion, crazy obsession
Has me bleeding under oppression
My love knows no ruling conditions
I've just let go, without definition
It's too late now to secure salvation
He's been far long exposed to your desperation
He knows he's the life on which you depend
Never sever, this love, you've played pretend
Don't know how to end this vexation
So you end it with my authentic frustration

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  • 17 years ago

    by Torn

    WOW love it:)
    I haven't read your stuff for a very long time, but it looks like you've just gotten better.
    There were so many lines that made me think, that will stick in my mind for a very long time.
    Awesome write:)
    Hope youre doing well..
    XoXoXoX

  • 17 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    I love this so0o much. The ryhme scheme is similar to the form I use, its challenging but cool. The only critique I have is the last stanza is a bt outgoing. {5/5}

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