Keep it up

First off. I don't see why people are rating this poem low. I loved it actually, and thought it was very well written. It flowed well and did not lose me like so many others have. Great Write.

I agree^ this poem deserves far better than the rating it has right now. This is a good poem, a part from one thing. It was difficult to tell if you meant to have a rhyme scheme, but chose not to in some places, or if you didn't intend to have one, but some words happen to rhyme. Other than that, it had a good flow, and I enjoyed reading it.

Aw, Thats kinda sad. Good though! The last two stanza's really brought it all together. And using your heart as a puzzle and how you have a missing peice, That was cool. I liked this one alot. Awesome job!

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Aww, that was amazing! But it had a pretty sad tone deep in it's depth. However, the sorrowed feeling I felt was beautiful because you manage to fit words together so nicely. I loved it! 5/5

I really loved this one. A lot of sad emotion in it. I liked how you describe your feelings. I also liked how you compared your heart to a puzzle. This was a really well written poem. Great job!

Wow that was a great poem... i understand what you were saying on my poems now too (thanks for the advice btw)... i think i understand what you were saying... check out my latest poem Sun and Rain and see if it's better please... i wrote it after you commented and i would really enjoy your thoughts on it

Ooh I really like the imagery here. I had this duality of meaning the entire time where I kept switching what I thought it was about. That's always fun. :)

I love this Poem.Well to tell you the truth i LOVE all your poems..Keep me updated with all your poems (: And keep writing MORE..15/10

Ooooh now this one I really really like. Trying to blame the person but knowing it is your fault, trying to piece your life back together but theirs a part of the puzzle missing that you gave away by your own free will. Nice, rhymes well also.
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Aww this poem makes me sad.. but a good sad because it makes me happy because it is really good. and sad. lol. But Seriously.
This is a really good poem. i can just relate to it. i think almost everyone can in some way. i like this part:
the piece that is missing
you didn't steal, but received;
I wanted to blame you,
but the fault lies with me.

its really good. keep writing i like your poems.( :

xLaurenx