I like this poem a lot and i can relate to it. The last lines were key...if only people asked more
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Lovely poem! Can't get any better than it is! And like they said the last stanza says it all. Most people choose to see what they want to see in somebody else and they don't care enough to think about what the person is really going through or is really feeling on the inside. I know how this feels. Trust me, your NOT alone! 5/5 Great job and keep up the good work!

-Steph-

I love this poem, it seems to have so much truth and emotion into it, you really got your feelings out on this one, good work hun, please check out some of my poems and comment on them to let me know what you think, it would be greatly appreciated.
love cass xoxo

I can totally relate to your poem. I know what it's like, to be someone outside and someone else inside.
I like the way you expressed that she's feeling alone and sad.

Great job! 5/5

I liked that, it was good and sad and well written.
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Awh, that's really sad. It's well written so I enjoyed it. Good job.

Its beautiful and tragic 5/5

The beat of this poem rock as dose the word.

Sweet song. I want to hear it. =] That sounds pretty awesome. Keep it up. I really don't know what else to say about this one. 5/5

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Wow this one was amazing i loved it ur a great writer