Wow...im speechless, im scared, your poem s definatly different i have yet to read one like it, well done

"I never did anything to deserve such hell!
And you do this? I hope you rot in hell.."
I didn't like the use of hell in two lines in a row, if you were to edit the poem I'd suggest changing one of them, or spacing them out more.

Otherwise it was another good story poem.

Im speechless....all i have to say is WOW!...nice job!

Heehee I enjoyed this poem, the darkness and story line was evil and it made me happy. well, that makes me sound a little twisted eh? lol

I was wondering if your title Teufel-Kind came from another language??

Wow. i love poems that have great imagry, and this one is oe of the best i'v read i a while. i noticed that you had saten speak in rhyme. that was quite clever. but i think when she specks to him, having her say hell in such quick consession takes away from the otherwise perfect flow of the poem

Ruby

REALLY unique way of writing, i really like it xxxx

Amazing Imagery.. Breathtaking.. Truly Amazing Poem. 5/5 For Sure..
Great Message As Well.

xoxo

xLauren3

Wow, my heart was beating so fast all the way through that poem, i loved it so much. Well done my friend.x

Wow....very... um... different, but very well writen.... you are really good at this type of poem. your writeing is amazeing

Yet another great poem. I love it. And Hay our names are pretty close. :)

Wow Amazing Poem Megan.

Love MKKA!

Wow another long one very different from the first semi short one I read!! Really nice, your oetry is so unique and different from the rest, almost a breather..great job

Alright so all in all please read any sis of my poems that look interesting

-ann

Amazing!!!!!! Kinda like mine, stories ^-^ you have a great imagination! 5/5 keep up the great work!

That was Incredible!!!so gory and dark and WOW..!!!! 5/5
but i dont know if this was a mistake or not but in the 8th stanza you wrote :
""My Darling, Dear Child. Oh the sweetness of the blood the runs down your lips."I think you meant "My Darling, Dear Child. Oh the sweetness of the blood THAT runs down your lips."
if thats not what you meant i'm sorry but that just caught my attention. Anyways..that really didnt change my opinion of your poem!!!I was mystifyed by all the DARK emotions in it!!!I loved it!!!