Crying for me, crying for them

by holly   Jun 2, 2006


Ive had a bad day
so i come home and cry
i want a friend to hold me but no one can care
they all have their own problems
that are nothing on mine.

i always feel so bad crying for my pains
when others have it so much worse than me.
i think of broken families
i think of deaths and losses
i think of third world countries
and cry for all those peoples pain
cause i always feel so bad crying just for me.

as the tears overflow
as mascara runs down my face
i think about my pain
i think about others
but whoever i cry for
whoevers pain
its still better to cry
to let it all out
even if they say that every 60 seconds you cry
is a minute of happiness you'll never get back
60 seconds crying is better than day after day of pent up pain.

so cry your eyes out then smile again
cause you can go on living
there wouldn't be sunshine without the rain
there wouldn't be happiness without the pain.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Polly

    Aw i can totally relate to this I really understand how you feel. In a way itds kinda inspirational... Well done I really think you explained emotions well... 5/5
    - Polly

  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Wow.amazing. u kno im very repetitive, but they are all so good! lovd everythin about this one.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    Good poem. I'd make sure that I capitalize my 'i's and add all the apostrophes I missed if I were you, just because it'll make the poem more presentable, and people will be less likely to judge it for its appearance.

    The two last stanzas were my favorites (actually the last stanza was my ... uh... super-favorite), probably because of a flowing rhythm that sort of pulled the reader along to a really solid conclusion.

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    There wouldn't be sunshine without the rain
    there wouldn't be happiness without the pain.
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    Loved those lines. This was a great poem, With alot of meaning to it. And its true aswell. Really awesome job! I loved it! 5/5

    .x.TaLeEe.x.

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Oh wow, you did an excellent job. I always feel the same way, feeling so bad crying when i know that a lot of other people have it so much worse than i do. But, you sent out a really great message with this poem. I really like these kind of poems. Keep up the good work. 5/5 :)
    -Jenna xo

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