Life

by Tina   Jun 3, 2006


What does it mean to live life
why does birth highlight innocence
why does death highlight ending

there are exceptions
for me , you and she
money,clothes, and ice
but yet what is life

i don't undestand
you stand or sit
but the clock still ticks
what is life

the sunset and rises but
yet tell what is life

i'll tell what life is
life is living
life is death
life is every minute and sec.
huh damn guess

i can say this a hundred times
yet some people still don't
uderstand
LIFE

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  • 19 years ago

    by Tina

    Thanks for underdstanding,oh by the way i wasn't aiming for ryhming, just to get the message across, good over view

  • 19 years ago

    by Rain

    To start off, the rhyming wasnt great, but poetry doesnt have to rhyme. The rhythem was pretty good, i could follow it. I completely understood the poem! I feel the same way alot. lol 4/5

    I just like to tell people why i rated what i rated them. ~Take care