Ill be an angel (my suicide)

by Hey Brittknee   Jun 5, 2006


Mommy please
Let me rest
I know this was
For the best

I was too broken
To stay alive
Ill be an angel now
And Ill learn to fly

When Im not here
And Im gone for good
Please love me then
I wish you would

I hope youll miss me
And I know Ill miss you too
But this was something
That I just had to do

Because I was too broken
To stay alive
Now Ill be an angel
And Ill learn to fly

Miss me then
And let me rest
I tied the noose
Around my neck

Hung myself
From the ceiling
Lost my breath
And all the feeling

I tied the rope
And made it loose
My suicide
Is my excuse

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  • 16 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    WOW!!!! This is a powerful poem. Nicely written! 5/5

    Josie

  • 17 years ago

    by Willow

    Thats brilliant. love ur work. thanx 4 tha comment too.
    love willow xxoo

  • 17 years ago

    by Eric

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    Eric

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

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  • 17 years ago

    by struggling

    I really love this keep up the good work another awesome poem.5/5