Holy moly. You did a fantastic job on this. As i read it, i was actually fricken singing. And i liked the sound of it, i also greatly enjoy singing, and to read lyrics, that are not already a song and be able to hear the melody and sing out loud with it, that is what we call truly amazing writing. 5/5 :)
-Jenna xo

Well done, it was definitely worth the wait!

Wonderful job, I hope it has music to it!! I love the bridge part, very true.

Wow, i wish i knew how the music went to this... that was so well, wonderfully written. man i want to know the music to this :P. oh well. well done, that was really a great job on this poem. 5/5 keep it up

I just love your poems.. i never get tired of reading them, they are all so different and so emotional.. its like im talking to you.. you just pour your heart and soul into your work and it really shows! this flowed well, used excellent imagery and language, and the rhymes worked well! what more could i ask for? another excellent write! 5/5

The title should be "Stronger than before" not 'then'
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"If only you could see, That I'm free."
is the comma necessary?
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I really really liked the chorus, I thought it was great.

Thats a really beautiful song it flows very nicely, u put ur verses and chorus in good order and i'm surprised u used a bridge thats great work gurl xox me

Ahem. *clears throat*

Person above me... before you go disrespecting someone's poetry/lyrics, which they worked extremely hard to write, why don't you do us all a favor and at least spell all the words correctly?

catagory-category*

And couldn't you have at least been COSTRUCTIVE? Instead of being a complete and utter heartless booger-head? {Yes, i called you a booger-head.}

Humans are capable of much greater things... like, oh i dunno, RESPECT. =)

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Anyways. Good poem, Natalie. I really liked it. You are a fantabulous writer, with mucho talent.

I-love-you-more.

This could be a new song sooner or later :p just need the right connections ;) anyways it's amazing i simply loved it, altough it was sad =)
the only thing i would change is this :

As I'm falling apart,
I'll pick up the pieces of my broken heart.
And when these tears run dry,
I'll gain the strength to say goodbye.
When fear comes knocking on my door,
I'll know I'm stronger than before.
(Before) (Before)
Stronger than before.

the repeat of before should come after the "stronger than before" or repeat the before before again after the last sentence

5/5

~StefQ

Very good! Very good emotions and word usage! 5/5 Keep up the good work!

-Stephanie-

As I was reading I caught myself singing the words in my head...now I am not sure what kinda beat you would choose but it was catchy and it flow very well. I like the chorus it was strong.

As I was reading I caught myself singing the words in my head...now I am not sure what kinda beat you would choose but it was catchy and it flow very well. I like the chorus it was strong.

Nice lines in it most people could relate to them, i would love to hear it with music and some one singing it well. Is it Acoustic song? gave the thing a 4/5 cause some nice line s might have already type that

Omg! I LOVED this song! It's great! You are so talented! Keep up the great work! 5/5!

Wow that was excellent! The song was extremely well written, what more can I say except I see absolute brilliance in your talent. 5/5

I thought you wrote this song very well!! Im not much of a song writter but in my opionion this would make a good song!! Again i love that u tried something different and didnt just stick whith poems!!! Truely Amazing!! Couldnt and wouldnt know how to change a thing!! 5/5!!! Beautiful!!!!!!!!!

I liked it.. wasnt astouding, tho.. i mean, it didnt blow me off, but u had a nice sense of rhyme and flow.. i especially liked the chorus (as with all lyrical verses).. i also liked the emotions in ur piece..
keep going
take care
NannO

I thought it was okay, i am going to be honest but kind, i didnt like it very much, because i am not a lyric person, but it wasnt really bad.
keep writing though.
xxxxx

...wow, that was astounding absulotly amazing, it gives you this amazing feeling like I would really love to hear it in actuall song. There was so much meaning defintily a 10/5 great job

This was a really strong write and it flows really well. I can't pick any holes in it, it's fantastic.