I really like this-its really good :)

Thanks to all the people who take their time to read this poems i relly appreciated. you comment in my poems and i'll comment back.
thank you!
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But, who said that life is big tall wall that no one could climb?

Wow amazing, really superb and true words. I lack in words to comment on this flawless piece. Great 5/5

Girl if you thought that you were so bad then why would 6+ people give you 5/5?
answer me that.

Nice poem. I really like the message although its not entirely true. If you keep looking forward and leaving the past behind you'll never get anywhere. As with everything, you need a balance. Keep an eye on the past and you'll probobly stop repeating a lot of stupid mistakes.

Anyways about the poem itself. It doesn't quite flow as well as i know you can make it. You made a good choice of words that made it flow as well as it could without structure. This is the first of your poems that i've read so far and i intend to read and comment on quite a few more. I wish i could make word selections like you do. If you read any of mine you'll notice most of them have a really rigid rhyme scheme and structure. As far as advice goes, try out different styles and just keep at it. The more you write the larger your vocabulary gets and the better you can write. Keep writtin great poems:P

Your words are truth, and no matter the styling, they are beautiful. I enjoyed this poem, keep up the beautiful work

This poem is inspiring anbd it has touch my heart, i remember my 1st days at the university i missed my school enough and i didnt do well bcoz i was always in the computer chating with my my former classmate, at the same tym stressed by some stories, well thank you for bring back my faith, u know its touching me that i shldnt let the day pass through my hands jst bcoz of the paast. YOu know exactly the form of life my sister, plz keep on writing. I will add this to my favourites so that anytime i feel like im loosing hope, its will guide me.

Thanx for commmenting on my so i thought i would take a gander at yours. i like this. i'm always looking to my past and fear it will be repeated again. but life moves on and changes like everything else.like winter changes to summer we can only hope for a betteror warmer time and place.

That was great

Very inspirational piece! I really needed to read that, as many do I'm sure. Thanks for posting poetry that uplifts the soul. Looking forward to more of work.

Charisma*

Very nice, inspirational. you said you're brutally honest on your profile, so you should check out some of my poems and let me know what you think :) thanks for sharing

This poem has a different theme, and i like that

i like how optimistic it is

keep it up:)

Um , I really like the idea and the whole inspiration part of it .. But theres not really any flow or anything to it , but still 4/5

There is alot of qualities in this poem that are inspirational and thats good but for the most part your telling the reader not showing the reader through visual stories or painting a picture with words just a thought will talk to you later plot121

Love it, good advice & inspiring w/o being sappy