Ahw this is sad

Rilly sad

That poem even thought its sad you expressed it relli well and got the point through nice job nena

Great. The same thing happened to me.i know knowing that doesnt change a thing. you do a fantastic job about writing it.

keep ur chin up.

Its a horrible experience but a great write, great use of words.

Stay strong =)

xxxx

That is horrible. Did that really happen??? Was it you that it happened to. I am so sorry to hear about how that happened

Aww.. if that happened to you in real life. im terribly sorry.. but that is a good poem.

This is very sad and it is absolutely disgusting that things like this do happen in real life. i love your writing skills in this poem good work and keep it up.

YOU SAID THIS WAS A TRUE STORY... IM SO SORRY THIS HAPPENED TO YOU!! DID YOU EVER TELL ANYONE!! DID HE EVER GET IN TROUBLE!?! IM SO..SO..SO SORRY!!

Aw thats sad i had the same thing happen to me so read some of my poems and maybe we could get closer as friends

Wow. great poem. sorry such a thing happened to u. its happened to someone i know. i know it must be hard. stay strong and keep it up.

Wow im so sorry!! that happen to someone i know!! its so terrible!!
be strong!!

This is a GREAT poem!!!! If that happened to you I am really trully sorry. I cried during reading this. I can kinda relate to it. One of my closest friends with through this with her dad!!! So yea i helped her out with all that. Im glad its over!!!! If its about your true story I'll be praying. Great poem!!!!

xoxo
ashlie

These kinds of stories are too distressing for words but yet you displayed the poem in a heartbreaking way especially capturing the thoughts of the little girl. im so sori this happened to u, wen u said u recognised the voice i thought it mite of bin ur uncle or somethin but your own brother!! thats so deep!

Its reaLLy sad but its wirtten gOOd !

Wow thats such an amazing and sad poem! im so sorry for you..talk to somone, wow amazing poem though!

I am so sorry that happen this poem made me cry if u could plez read mine they r not as good but ok i guess thank you so much and again this poem was good

Wow, thats a really sad poem but well written!! Did this really happen!!...Sorry aye that really sux

Omg i am so srry if that happend to you. i think its good you write your feelings on paper, it always makes me feel better, keep your head up high!
keep writing!
xoxo, kitty

Wow!! that's so horrible..and i know how you feel the same thing happend to me...but just not with my brother...its a horrible thing but u wrote it so well...keep it up