Aww, this is sad, but i love it shauna good job =)

Woohoo!! go me!!

Lol ok, have you ever tried to write about nick? it might help you, it helps me. I know you wouldnt listen, and that is what i think drifted us apart. he ruined me and now you, im sorry, i love you. comment on my poems ill read them!

Great job, I felt kinda sick because the imagery was so good that i could picture the blood, and i can't handle all that, i have a weak stomach, but you did an amazing job! keep writing you are really good..almost as good as me... haha JUST KIDDING.... you are very good, i really like your poems... and i will be so sad next wednesday at like what? 10? when the dance ends ) : I'm so nervous and excited @ the same time! haha good job!

**meggie**

I like this it might be long but it has a lot of meaning to it also..
comment on my poems please

Wow this is an excellent poem! One of the best I've read today. Great imagery and emotion. I loved it!~~

[xxx Thank you for your comment on my poem! xxx]

Excellent poem.. really enjoyed reading it.. sad but great xx

This is the best i have read. it is a work of art to my heart

I loved your poem is was great if i could give you a 100 i would

Omg wow that is soooo sad.. it made me almost start crying.. but its good. it has great imagery and emotion and its jus a deep deep sad poem. but its veyr good also... so keep on writing u hvae so much talent.. great job 5/5
take care
luve angie

This is a really good poem but also really sad. Good work

This made me bloody cry. omg so sad and depressing ahh too much for me actually not but your so good keep it up
xoxroxyxox

Woah~~~ great poem~~~~ i really really love it!!! nice job:D