by FeelingIsickIinmyhead Jun 8, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
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I woke up in the streets |
by Kayd
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Twisted and erie... deffinently different, but I liked it! ;) |
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Hmmm I dont think we met before Jaimie It might be someone else. |
by mookoo
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I thought it was good, i always use that rhyme scheme. it would add to the flow if u attempt to keep similar lengths between couplets. but i liked the theme and it had good closure...much luv |
by ~**Jaimie**~
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Did i talk to you last night? i dont know if that was you or somenoe else. |