The end

by CHOKE   Jun 8, 2006


Putting the gun to your head
imagining your body lifeless and dead
tears falling as you fidget
this cannot happen death has got your digits

you cry out in pain
how could you be so crazy, so insane
you just wanted to be happy
but you know that no matter what your life will always be crappy

you lie to yourself and say things will get better
then you realize your lie, and start to write your suicide letter
this is it, this is the end
I'm sorry but my heart is broken and i can no longer bend...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Nice and seem everyone are impress! coz the emotion,, flow and i think everything are pretty good...

  • 17 years ago

    by StormXclusive

    Great poem, felt very word of it, Damn keep them coming.

  • 17 years ago

    by Dean Russell-Rands

    Great poem, I was really impressed, its very emotional and I feel that way a lot but tbh I can never do it because I chicken out and I hope that the thing holding me back means I cant do it for a reason - theres a time for us all and i think your time isnt here yet - i'm here to talk to if you want =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Swiss1804

    Wow, great writing! youre really talented!

  • 17 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Wow i really loved this poem. its amazing.. ur a great writer.. keep it up.. i love it. its jus wow. its great.. 5/5 keep writing
    angie

    chek out some of mine if u want

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