It was very good, yet some of the end rhyme wasnt 100% there, i too do this with trial and error. but your a great poet, keep trying - Meg

Hey, great job on this one. thanks for your lovely words,
truely
molly

Hey thanks for the comment. And omg that is really good.

Its a really good poem because I can relate it to myself though I haven't start cutting.....yet

Thxs for commenting on my stuff I always return the favor :)

Hey love ur poem, thanx 4 ur comment on mi poem!
luv 4eva mel

Lovely...5/5
thanks for the comment on my poem.

You are a talented writer. keep it up :D
5/5

Breanna

Ooooo i luv this one to all your poems hav so much meaning i just enjoy reading them so much.......also i luv your quotes.
keep ya head up high!!
x x xmoniquex x x

V. emotional, a lot of feeling in this poem! gd work! xXx

Aww sad poem but i can so totally relate to it
you have an amaing talent i can tell you write from the hart with feelings and emotions
keep up the greatwork
5/5
stay strong
lovelove
Alice
xxxxxx
&&thanks for the comment =]

Hey this poem is pretty good, it's swicked...comment on all my poems please I want to know if I truely suck...honestly that is what I think...lol catch yal laterr...

Wow this is a really good poem, i can understand the point your getting to and i can almost feel the emotions you put into this poem.. keep up the great work .4/5

So very sad

Omg you are awesome

Thats very sad...its kinda scary too..:\ I luvve ya Angiee! Carefull!=) XoX ChelsS

I can relate to this poem great job angie keep on writing

Its really sad but i liked it 5/5

xoxox