I need a Angel

by NothingGoldCanStay   Jun 8, 2006


I need a angel
That can tell me right from wrong
To show that i am not a messup
And to sing to me a new song

I need a angel
That can stop these tears
To show me that my fate isn't so bad
And that I have a little more years

I need a angel
That can show me a better life
To never give up or let me go
And to take me away from that unfaithful knife.

I need a angel
That will make these needs come alive
To know I at least have something
And when i'm down give me a hi-five.

I need no angel to tell me i will get no help
That i am by myself
To fix my own problems
And to fix my own health.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Emma Brown

    Don't we all? Brilliant poem, 5/5.
    Much love, Emma xox

  • 17 years ago

    by SweetxMisery

    I really like this one because it reminds us that we all need a saviour by our side. We cant always be strong or no where to go which is why life is so hard. Nice work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Nick Hanshaw

    Ill be your angel....=)

  • 17 years ago

    by blueknight

    Wow this one is great I need an Angel ... cassie this is one of your greates poem i love this one this is a kind of deep and great you got a great stuff good keep it up 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaylee

    You write well but you're more than less explaining and yes some poems tend to call for it but I think maybe you should write a poem that goes more into the emotions of why you want this or want that instead of just telling us. :)

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