Lifeless

by Sunflower   Jun 9, 2006


What did you do
You broke me
How did you do it
Forsake me
Feathers falling
Our love crawling
Beneath the doors
Of this lifeless soul

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  • 16 years ago

    by The Unwritten Love

    Nice poem .. :D good job

  • 17 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Short, yet to the point. I like your use of words. Are you not going to write any more??? xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    Wow that is just simply amazing. I love every word, every line, and the whole feeling of this poem. You have an intriging way with words and hwo you put them together. Keep it up!

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