Like it alot, describes romance in a very nice way
poem flows very well to, always nice when a poem sounds very good when spoken out loud, well done
keep it up

Its very nice, it flows very well. I must warn you however that you can get in troub for the "Please Read" in the title...

[PygmyPuff]

This is absolutely beautiful, the imagery was fantastic. The langage was soft and enjoyable to read - you painted a lovely picture in my head. A wonderful write. This was a pleasure to comment on. 5/5

This was great =) Job well done 5/5

I really liked your poem, it's original and it kept my attention. I also liked the title, and the whole message was really detailed.

Good job! 5/5

Keep writing.

Wonderfully written! It was unique but original at the same time. So beautiful and stunning. Keep up the good work! xxx

Very sweet poem. Great job Hannah

Awwwww. that was soooo sweet i give you a 5/5. love how it was written

Great romantic imagery with free flowing prose

OK I know this is going to sound cheesy but I mean it as a true compliment. My boyfriend sends me "I love you" cards once in a while and they always have these horribly cheesy poems in them that the cardmakers wrote. This poem would be much better to receive like in a card from someone you loved or something. It's beautiful.

Very nice
nice words 5/5 :)

This is awesome and flows very well. really cute, 5/5

Very Nicely Written...I enjoyed reading it a lot...Well Done

This was very well written. The inagery created was very vivid yet a bit sad.
"a fountain in the park
and the thousands of coins
bedding it
Each with its own casted wish
for love"
I have fond memories of wishing fountains...
The last 2 lines really finished the poem off strong. The flow was undisturbed and the format used was awesome.

Your poem was very beautiful, it describes love and romance very well. It was great!!!
Stephanie

Now that is a good poem! thanks for reading mine and i've quite enjoyed yours aswell! well take care and tell leslie(Naughty chica) to take care! seeya!

Very nice work! I loved the emotion and depth you put toward this piece. Nicely done!

-Jennifer.

Hmmmmm who could you possibly be talking (or in this case, writing) about? I might have to think about that one for a while. that was really good though Bob. :)
luv ya as long as i live
Fredd... is going insane! hahaha

Lol...this poem is indeed a very romantic write.very sweet!..you've expressed the poem n created a romantic atmosphere to the whole peice!!..Ver well done!
Kp it up!
xxPoojaxx