Best Friends?

by NothingGoldCanStay   Jun 10, 2006


Ricky Rock and Rocky Rick
Stayed home because they were sick
But Ricky Rock
Opened the lock
To play at the park
Eventhough it was dark
Rocky Rick went too
The idea of trouble, they never knew
Ricky Rock had a trip
Because of that he broke his hip
SO Rocky Rick went to get Rocky Road
And didn't some back until he finished his ice cream load

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  • 17 years ago

    by blueknight

    Wow a poem that full of rhyme i like rhymes it makes me feel great
    this one is great but dig a little more put all your feeling by the way 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    This was pretty good, but i personally think that you shouldn't have made it rhyme.. it would have contained more emotion if you had used words that you really meant rather than just words that rhyme.. good job though! 3/5

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