AHHHH...jessyyyy..this poem was very good! you know i like all of your emotional poems...But this was different:( i just cant except that there is chance of you leaving,,,maybe its because of dat...well...I WILL NEVER EVER FORGET YOU!! and i think i kinda know you wrote dat poem for;) haha..cya!

Hey great job, this poem is very emotional, very powerful for the reader. Its different too!! I really liked reading it.

Keep up the great work Jade

This is so emotional, the delivery and flow are perfect with good use of imagery. It's fantastic x

That is really good....
keep it up grl
Love me
Jennifer

Thats just how i feel sometimes, my friend. Youre poems are really good, and i enjoy reading them.
just wanna take this oppurtunity for all your kind words, thankyou, they mean alot to me always.
xxxxxxx
Take Care

I like this. This is really great. 5/5
-Vino

That was a rlly good poem and i got how sad and in love u were....and mayb still are....grrt poem and u hav a beatiful way with words....nice....loved it...
love ya lots,
sore

That was a rlly good poem and i got how sad and in love u were....and mayb still are....grrt poem and u hav a beatiful way with words....nice....loved it...
love ya lots,
sore

That was an excellent poem. Very well written and full of emotion. I loved it!

Love poems. Are wonderful. We foiund this one well written and amazing. Hope you continue to write.

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Last stanza. WOW. This poem was really good. I loved how you worded it aswell. I could really feel the emotions as I read it. You did a fantastic job Jessy! Keep it up and smile =] 5/5

`Taleee xx

Wow. Excellent Write. Thought it was very emotional. *sniffle sniffle*

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OMG that reminds me sososo much of when i moved away from canada almost a year ago it was the hardest day of my life and im still not over it i think about canada all the time your poem almost brought me to tears when you said

"Never again
To see your sweet smile
Or the sparkle in your eyes
Never again to hear
Your teasing voice
Or to see
Your silly faces.."

You did the greatest job on this poem it brought back so many memories Thanks :-)

KurMiT

Oh and def. 5/5

Very touching emotional poem. Great job

Hey! dis is so sad! love ti tho!