Tears running so fast

by kirby   Jun 10, 2006


The eyes in my face begin to water
begin race
as they drop from my face
so fast
yet so slow
just as the hit the floor
you see an eye in the cracks
then BAM opened that door
your friends hug u
worried
then u tell them to leave
off they go clueless indeed
then u hear that tear drops
makes a loud sound
as the tears run down your face
it feels like their havin a race

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  • 17 years ago

    by Fredaeya

    Nice one kirby, i do agree with the comment above tho (^^^^^) add some more imagination into it, itll make it even betta!

  • 17 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    I love htis poem. its soo good. i can relate. it has great flow and rhythm.. its amazing.. keep on writing ur rele good. 5/5
    angie :)
    chek out some of my poems somtime