I Liked It, Its Diffrent From What I'm Use To Reading And That Intrigues Me Because The Story Plots In This Poem Leads To An Unexpected Ending...Your An Unpredictable Poet, And I Like That Aspect Of Your Writing 5/5 *Craving For More* xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Hey I loved that poem...I agree with Nikki that is a different style for me. But it was still good...well written and it flowed well. Great job.
I give you a 5/5 xD
Breanna