Hold On

by Irish Sweetheart   Jun 11, 2006


Hold me,
I'll hold you tightly,
we never know,
how many days we have left,
enjoy what is present,
forget about the past,
life is short,
let's enjoy it as long as we can,
so hold me tightly,
always hold my hand,
kiss me while you can,
hold on to what we have,
to lose it would be the end.

Danielle-2004
Written to my baby on Valentine's Day together.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow good.

  • 17 years ago

    by emptysole

    Thumbs up great work 5/5:)

  • 17 years ago

    by LOVEmeNOT

    Dis is cute...gud job..4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Maybe limit the amount of times you mention 'hold.' Now the poem was short but it felt more PSA (Public Service Announcement] narrative than an emotional piece. Instead of saying hold me while you can describe emotionally how it feels to be held with either poetic or non poetic words. Try metaphors and even similies [But I'd limit on those].

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