This is really cute-i feel like this w/ my b/f! you did a good job! 5/5

This is a good poem! I can relate to it a lot! I sometimes wonder about my boyfriend a lot! Good job! 5/5

This is a gud poem but it dnt rhyme which is ok cuz itz still gud...4/5
If u wuld have put a lil bit of suttin else in it to break off a lil bit of all da I 's wuld b a lil better but itz still gud..keep up da gud work

-Melissa

Keep Writing.

I love this poem! i love the progression, the way you can feel exactly what you are feeling just by reading it. i felt like i was you - or in your shoes, at least - as i read it. and it looks long, but it isnt boring or anything