Dreaming

by loving my kids tessa and savannah   Jun 11, 2006


Im looking for you
Day and night I ask for you
No one seems to see you
Are you there?
Are you real?
Am I just thinking you still here with me?
It all makes no scenes now
I know you are real
But why cant they see you
Its like you are a ghost on a cold winter night
Longing for me to see
It cant be true I need
Some one to tell me it all just a dream
So when I awake you will be there by my side

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jynx

    It's a good poem, just need to edit the spelling & jibberish around it. Heh.
    Good job.x

  • 17 years ago

    by ŘÅÇĦ♥

    It's a good poem but you need to edit it and take all the weird stuff the computer put in there it does it on mine to just take it out and than i noticed in this sentence"Am I just thinking you still here with me?" it should be your*

    Hope I helped. :]
    Rach♥

  • 17 years ago

    by LOVEmeNOT

    Umm...itz kinda confusin..but u did a gud job...3/5

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