Another excellent poem. I loved how deep your poems go and you have such an amazing rhyme scheme. I love it! This poem tells a lot about you, its a wonderful piece, 5/5. so amazing.

Hey fantasticly written hun! sorry I havn't been around lately but year 12 is killing me! lol anywhoo! good job keep it up! *hugs* ruthie xoxo

This poem was incredible. You had a wonderful sequence of events that ended in a powerful conclusion. Your word choices where amazing and so was your flow. That was an excellent poem hun. Thank you for the sweet comment that you left me.

-Tainted

Beautifully woven words, good format and nice flow. Good added emotion and sense of reality as well. Overall wonderful write.
5.5

As always~ Kate

Hmm, simple and effective. i enjoyed reading this heaps! free verse, i shoudl consider that some time, looks like it's the new kind of poetry. lol