Excellent work. It's kindof sad though, if it's about what i think it's about...
Anyway, 5/5

Yet again, another WOW poem! your writing is just amazing, theres no other way to describe it! excellent work! 5/5

Really enjoyed this poem, great work!

Stanza #4 was my favorite. Was this for the dark/fantasy contest? I think I saw this one around...

Anyhow, the reason I liked stanza #4 was because of the repitition, I thought it developed into a really cool rhythm, and the repeated words were really interesting ones.

Overall, I thought the rhyme scheme was unobtrusive when it came to the message of the poem, and since this was sort of a story poem, I think that you did a good job developing it.

WOW o,o
AMAZING
...mia...

Awesome job with this poem in my contest. Very catchy

I loved it! good job, sad, but inspiring!
5/5

-Bloomed Rose

Wow gr8 work again, u have a gr gift. excellent use or wording and details

Amazing poem---i read it two times---great work u have lots of talent 5/5

All your poems are inspirational.

Kazza

Really good im adding you to my favorites your a great writer i think you should have got first place.

Another intense well written dark poem climaxing with tragedy

Really a good poem! Very strong and so well written! Great job!

Great poem

Very well written sad ,and depressing poem

Love is formed and hearts are wasted,
Crushed to pieces and torn apart.
Evil lovers stabbing their back,
^^^very true^^^
This is an Awsome poem! I love it. It's...dark...and I love it! 5/5
There was alot of truth in that poem and i think you'r a great writer, keep it up!

This is awesome i love it

Wow, one of the best poems i have read in a while, loved it

sarah xx

Wow this was a very good poem!
I enjoyed readin it so much
I love dark poems they always mean something to me!
great job on this one hun
Keep it up
NemO xXxXxXxX

Wow second, this one desirves first, a great poem once again, I gave it a 5/5 its it so true, and i love this poem, it has flow and it paint a picture in your mind, A Great poem!