by Mel Jun 12, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
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As she stands back and watches |
by Lauren
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WOW!! I got goosebumps. That is an amazing poem. Extremely sad, but extremely good!!!! It all flows together so well. The concept is very good and its very interesting. Just so sad. Great writing though. |
by StandStill
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I seriously got chills. the end was so unexpected. but that definitely matches. because a person's end is so unexpected. beautiful poem. |
by ryan
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Wow, that was really sad .... it was an amazing poem but it was sad ... I loved it 5/5 |
by Deana
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Wow! I could not believe this came from someone your age. It was so sad but so is life sometimes. Thank you for reading and commenting on mine. |
by SaveMe?
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Aww this is really sad ='[ |