XXI (cinquain)

by Oceansoul   Jun 13, 2006


Inside
and out of sight
lie my feelings for you
to remain forever with me
in thoughts

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  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    I recently did a cinquain too. Is this a first? It has a good flow to it. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Bloomed Rose

    The syllables were right, great job! it was very good! 5/5
    nice, short, and sweet

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