by JAMIE Jun 15, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I am still wishing and hoping |
by Natalie
Again, I liked this. I even actually liked how you did the 'sigh' thing. It was different but i liked it! You also got straight to the point which was also great. 5/5 |
by Bloomed Rose
Great job. you know, I love to read love poems! MOST are always so good and emotional! you really know how to write some good ones! 5/5 |
Note: "of course" instead of "of coarse" ;) |
by Bloomed Rose
Very nicely written! great job!!!!!! well, 5/5! |
It's good but I'm not sure I like how complete sentences and thoughts are broken up into smaller lines for seemingly no reason at all. You can have longer lines, you know. The last stanza for instance could say: |