Hopes for the Future

by JAMIE   Jun 15, 2006


I am still wishing and hoping
That you will finally come back

Last night while I was thinking
I thought of ...*sigh*... homecoming
I know it is a long time away
And that is what gives me a little more hope
By that time I hope
We could be good friends
And just maybe we could go
To homecoming ...*sigh*... together

Of course we could go as friends
That would not bother me
Just to be there with you
Would mean the world to me

But would you even consider it
My friend thinks I have a small chance
I kind of think so too
But at the same time I highly doubt it

But if when you said
No other girl appeals to you, still applies
Would you go to homecoming with me
But that is a question I dare not ask
If you want to go with me
Then you would ask me
So would you ask
Or would you not want to go with me

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Again, I liked this. I even actually liked how you did the 'sigh' thing. It was different but i liked it! You also got straight to the point which was also great. 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bloomed Rose

    Great job. you know, I love to read love poems! MOST are always so good and emotional! you really know how to write some good ones! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    Note: "of course" instead of "of coarse" ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by Bloomed Rose

    Very nicely written! great job!!!!!! well, 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    It's good but I'm not sure I like how complete sentences and thoughts are broken up into smaller lines for seemingly no reason at all. You can have longer lines, you know. The last stanza for instance could say:

    So would you ask?
    Or would you
    not want to go with me?

    Stuff like that. Anyway it's a very heartfelt poem and I like it.