Comments : Life's Distant Path

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr M

    Quite good...I loved this piece

  • 16 years ago

    by STEVE

    I love your poem you are a talented writer so GO AUSSIE GO 5/5 Steve

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This was a very good piece, the wording and language was very good, the imagery was well portrayed, a very good message.
    Well done
    love Tara-Kay

  • 16 years ago

    by Kat

    Wow, I really like this poem. Great job! The ask yourself part was my favorite one. Thanks for the comment on my poem. I give you a 5/5.


  • 16 years ago

    by JaMeS

    A very meaningful piece there it really got me thinking!! x

  • 15 years ago

    by Nix

    Interesting poem, I like it, so unique and idea of it is excellent. You pointed truly powerful message with your words and repetition of some words and lines really left good impression to me. Well done!