Awwww! That was so cute!! I'm gonna cry cause it's that cute. You did so good on this one. It flowed really well and everything tehe. Awesome job! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

That was sooo sweet im sure your dad would love that very much keep up the good work. 5.5

Great rhyming, and very touching. I could feel the solid rhythm all the way through. No critique on this one.

What a beautiful, perfectly written poem for the man that matters most in anybody's life. A special poem for Father's day. Good work my friend ! :)

Very cute. :)

Awww Darien this is such a wonderful poem. Beautifully written and so heartfelt. It makes me all happy inside to see what a great bond you guys have. (ps some day you'll come to NL and see exactly what it's like ;))
Amour,
Kim

This is the cutest dedication I have ever read! Wow Darien...you never cease to amaze me. I'm so glad that you and your dad have such a great relationship.

Beautifully done. Very touching. Your heart and love shine through.

So nice! really great poem. your dad must be a great guy. i really liked this poem. are you going to give him this for fathers day? i think he might like that.

Great Poem, I enjoyed reading it- so thanx
When you have the chance, could you rate my poem “If I”
Appreciated- Truly Spoken

Touching poem, perfect timing. did you show this to your dad?

Lovely write. Such touching poem on a special day for your dad. Good write. 5/5

Beautiful father's day poem, actually capturing a feeling written in the words instead of a poem just telling you. I loved the rhyme scheme and the emotions comming from the poem.

Great poem Darien! Sounds like your father and you have a lot in common. You must have a great relationship too.
Nate aka "The Tie Guy"

Wow what a great touching poem from a proud son your dad should be real proud of you this is excellent

Awwwww!! darien that was soo sweet! i loved it.. the rhymes worked well, the emotion was flowing out, and it was just so perfect.. very very cute! excellent write! 5/5

Excellent I bet your dad liked it! The flow was great no work neede here!lol

AWWWWWWWW. tht was a great father's day poem. it flowed well, its very touching. n great rhyming...5/5
Well umm Take care.
xxx

Awee! this is such a cute poem it is actually so good! you can tell that you put a lot of effort into it and that you actually wanted this to be a good one about you and your dad! nice worK!

Omg you must really like your dad, it soooo cute, 5/5...