It was so soft. Good one

Mutter softly your delicate dreams
In fields of corn, where sunlight beams
Caress the day, endure the night
Awaken gently into the light
Two lovers entwined

That was such an enchanting entrance, and it liked it the best out of all the stanzas. The repepition was so beautiful and soft. The entrie poem was so delightfully romantic.
A wonderfully beautiful poem!

Beautiful poem Simon. Your lady is very lucky to have someone who can express himself so eloquently.
The Tie Guy

Sie, time and again you have blown me away, and this time is no different. Your words mesmerize me and lift me to True Love's Heaven. Beautiful work!

Simon
Just wanted to let you know that I enjoyed reading this poem, truly amazind as usual. Take care my friend, great poem.