Awesome poem chicky soz bout your dad hey.

Woah i love your poem~ good work

Great poem. Sorry about your dad, That had to be hard to write about. Keep up the good work. -Red

Hey, that was so sad...but it was a really good poem. Sorry about your dad...keep up the good work though.
5/5

Breanna

Oh, I am sorry for your lost, it is a big lost, but it is all part of life.
i hope things get better for you and your family.

Wow. i'm sorry about your father.
Ace poem. 5/5

Neither would a milluion tears,

I think you made a spelling mistake there.. million**

Though apart from that, I liked it.

xx.N-G-C-S.xx

Omg great poem, 5/5

Sarah

So sorry

trying to make me cry

Wow, I really liked that, it touched me.

Though it been long time ago I still remember the feeling you and your family faced from you poem. I know it cannot bring your dad back but I am so certain he is looking after you every way possible from the heaven, so when you see the stars at night next you would find that one of them will be shinning brighter than ever, and that is the star for your, that is the light emanating from your dad.

..... this poem really touched me. U are an amazing peot, i am sure you ur dad is watching over you and is very proud! i loved it!

Awwwww your making me cry all your poems do that to me. but i still love them anyways. you are on my favorites list definatle! 5/5 **tear**tear** i know that me saying sorry won't take away your pain but i am saying it anyway and you just made a friend
much love
~~~tara~~~screename~~tenten~~

I must comment again! because i am in LOVE with this poem! by the way my dad died when i was 2 so i didn't realy know him so your not alone! but seriously keep up the awsome work! because no poem could capture my heart the ways your's do!

Hey, this is really something i can relate to cos i feel the exact same way as said in the poem. i lost my dad last december, it may have been 7 months gone but it still pains me like no one else knows.

great poem. =)

I have never read a piece that hits me like this one... i would like to ask if i can read it at my friend logans runeral. It is on september 14th. i understand if thats not okay... it is just very moving.