Deep, emotional and heart felt! Your words are incredibly hopeful, yet sadening too. Wonderfully done Mary!

WoW! My friend....what a wonderful, heartfelt poem. Beautiful.

This is such a beautiful poem, well done, keep up the good work. I will look forward to seeing what else you come up with, you're work is excellent!!

Don know but lately i noticed u lingering and waiting , same theme. hope this waitng comes to an end. a good one.
Cheeeeers,
Wishhy

Nice, well done

Lovely poem you have expressed it beautifully and the emotions are very real i love it xxALLYxx

I love the flow o fur poem...I can totally relate to it...It is really beautiful...An heartrending read which I enjoy...

Awwwww this is so sad!! :((

Sad ! :( but a great poem 5/5 :)

Excellent....I really liked you poem

Its been a while since I read a poem from you, and I just love it. You portrayed your true emotions and longing. Excellent write.

Best Wishes
Michelle

This poem is amazing.
I felt my life unfold in front of me when I read it.
Tears came, and the pain returned
Good poetry does that!

Hey
wot a brilliant poem...
its so deep and its so how iwas feeling bout someone who left me.. god well done

Aww.. so sad.. but hey i lyk it.. great poem 5/5 ;)