Infidelity

by lexie   Jun 20, 2006


Hey baby,
I've been thinking you lately,
hope your still thinking of me,
wondering where you are right now,
what your blue eyes are seeing,
what your thinking,
as you're slipping off her shirt,
bet you dont even know her name,
so go ahead and unbutton those jeans,
cuz you dont know how you're killing me,
oh,how you're killing me.

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  • 17 years ago

    by holly

    Lovely p[oem, beautiful flow good stong wording liked the illusion to what the guys was doing with another girl. great job xxALLYxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    "what you blue eyes are seeing,"
    'you' should be 'your'
    ~~~
    "what your thinking,
    as your slipping off her shirt,"
    "cuz you dont know how your killing me,
    oh,how your killing me. "
    all of those "your"s should be "you're"
    ~~~
    I really liked the repitition at the ending, it sounded very spoken, which I take as a form of poetic personalization. I liked the details and the length of the poem, I thought it all flowed rather well.

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