Promises

by Jaimi   Jun 20, 2006


You promised you would never leave

I still feel stupid because i believed

When i had to say good-bye

I wish i could've been the one to die

You left me all alone

With only tears

I can't believe you left me

After only nine years

Your promises were lies

That eventually had to break

When mommy told me the news

I knew there was some mistake

I know you still see me

Thats something thats true

Every once I'm a while

I wish i could be up there with you.

Dedicated to my daddy I love you 5-30-00

By: Jaimi O'Donnell

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  • 17 years ago

    by HuggyQueenofCookies

    I can't stop reading this poem..it's beautiful..

  • 17 years ago

    by HuggyQueenofCookies

    Oh, Jaimi, I'm so sorry...I agree with Jake.. It is a great poem...you should write more, you are VERY talented

  • 17 years ago

    by Se Lest

    A loss is a very sad thing, fate connot be controlled becuase i bet if it was then he wouldnt have left.

    very good poem. very very good