WOW, great poem hun.. luv ya.

5/5 again... cuz u rock!!!!

Ally

Aww i reely want the 2nd one. i only got the 1st one:( its 2 expensive o well gr8 work. u make me really want the 2nd one..lol

Wow! As soon as I was in the middle of your short but powerful poem I thought of Kingdom Hearts. lol, that was beautiful how you used it as an inspiration. I love the series of that game, and how you used it in a poem. Very unique! keep it up!

Nah i don't play KH2 but it's a neat little poem none-the-less. short and sweet. i like!
-Suz

KH2 has some pretty good imagery.

"Though I would take the form
Of darkness itself,
If I could save you..."
greatness!