by BlAcK TaNgLeD HeArT Jun 21, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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My innocence has now been lost, |
by Domino0792
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Beautiful poem, sad and heart breaking but still a wonderful piece. good job honey! |
by Jose Delapaz
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Hey you got some talent excellent poem I can relate to it I know how you feel and you have time check out some of my poems and tell me what you think |
by BeLLa
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I love this poem!! thanks for the comment on my poem!! Are you a cutter? do you feel trapped? I understand this poem- thankyou for writing wat i couldnt!! keep it up 5/5 ciao xo |
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Same. i know how you feel again. |
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Wow-this is really deep and you expressed your emotions well---I love the title-It really caught my attention! The only errors I saw are the site errors where you had apostrophes-You might want to edit those---Good write 5/5 Keep it up! |