Wow oh wow.... you put in a lot of emotion into this.... i understand how you feel totally in this and I am amazad at how well you put your feelings into words.... you have such a great talent....

Dont eva give up. u have ur purpose and a menaingful life. and i mean it when i say dont give up, otherwise u'll become me. like the poem anyway keep writing

Hey, really powerful poem, great work keep it up,
keep strong, mel

Hey,
Great poem really well written
i really like the line:
Now my blackened heart will no longer sing
Thanks 4 your comment and suggestion aswel its really apreciated
I cant wait to read some more of your work
take care
~AllCutUp~

Wow...great poem Sammib...A lot of emotion. Amazing how some ppl right so much better than me :P lol good one

Woah... deep... trying to save the world... thats ok.. keep trying.. dont give up... but take a break ü

Wow this is amazing.. I like it :)
5/5 :)

Nice format.. great use of words... well writen. great poem by a great author...
5/5

Great man another 5/5 love ur poems