Oh noni, that is so cute!!!!!!!!!!! awesome job!!!!!!!! I love all of your poems! cul8r!

Wow, this was a beautiful poem, you painted a lovely picture so descriptive, well done

You are such a good writer! i never feel disappointed after reading them, each one paints a different picture and they're really meaningful :)

Great poem-loved the rhyme in it! 5/5

"Here you come in threads of love
Come to me my dear beloved"
I thought that was a weak rhyme since beloved is no more than love with a be in front and a 'd' behind. I'd consider changing the rhyme.
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I liked all the rest of the rhymes, and dacing with a swan's grace is a great image.

This kind of paintes a romantic feel to it. I mean the emotions are there. The rhymes weren't forced but maybe here or there could have been a bit stronger. I did like the cherry tree though.

I loved it i thought it was the best one i have read to day which is sayin alot

Haha cherry tree... for me it was the oak tree.. lol very nice poem.. loved it :D

Thats a really sweet poem. And you described everything very well, I could picture it all in my mind. The flow and rhythm of it was really good, and my favorite part was the opening stanza, it was very descriptive and painted a great picture for the poem to follow. Great job on this! 5/5

I love this poem. love the detailz

Aaww this is such an adorable poem!! i loved it!

Beautiful.. thanks for sharing this, keep up the good work

This was really good. Believe it or not I wrote a story in my creative writing class and it was called Under the Cherry Trees. But this was really good and light. It was something that I could read really easily and bring out the rythem of the poem. Hey is that how u spell rythem this I will ponder. Hey nice work. I liked it a lot. Take Care!

Well done on winning my competition
this is a lovely poem, pretty images came to mind as i read it, beautiful flow unobtrosive rhyme and throughly enjoyable to read

Wow..this ones good. No..YOURE good. lol keep it up
5/5
skittles

This one is very descriptive, and it touches you in such a way that most poets strive for! Amazingly crafted!

A very peaceful poem, gorgeous imagery and a strong rhythm/flow.

the only thing i can criticise is the 3rd stanza; you use the word 'place' in the 1st and 2nd lines and 'lips' in the 2nd and 3rd lines. this is very noticeable and inturrupts the poem.

also the second line of this stanza doesn't really make sense...

-biscuit-

Creepy how good this is it doesnt sound like a stupid kid just writing a poem its like out there

you are great no matter what they say

-keep it real
peacea -devin

Awe.. thats cute...

lol made me think of garry and me :P

5/5