Nice rhyme and rhythm again. Still don't know how you write so many sad poems. The poem had excellent diction, but I felt that some details would spice it up, it was all pretty general stuff (general stuff that was described very poetically).

Wow.. what a wonderful poem! i loved it! although i did find that i didn't enjoy the first stanza quite as much.. even so, this poem was amazing.. it was so powerful and strong.. and i truly love how you express your feelings.. the descriptions in this were just beautiful! you have such a way with words.. you are an excellent poet and you will be famous one day!! keep up the fantastic work! im always looking to read more! 5/5

I agree with Sean, I don't know how you write all those sad poems either. You seem like a really happy person without a care in the world.

This was a great poem, I enjoyed the rhymes. Creative stuff.

It's pretty general but the message gets across and that is what's important. THe rhyming felt as if it flowed right.

Your poems are all wonderful
check out my poems sometime it would mean a lot.

This poem, to me, is one of your best. Great flow and wonderful natural rhymes. Keep it up

I liked your word choice. I thought it was really good. The rhythem was good, and it had emotion in it. I can relate to it a lot. Great job!

Wow, Nat =/

you ok...?

please talk to me, hun. i hate it when people i love are down and don't feel like they can come and talk to me.

i love ya, m'dear.

please keep your head up. and email me if you need to talk.

E>

good poem. i know how this feels~

Defiantly amazing poem right here. i am going through this right now. my boyfriend well ex boyfriend now broke up with me cause i wouldnt tell him why i was depressed and i wouldnt talk to him about things cause i just couldnt .. i locked it away so he broke up with me. but anyway.. i really didnt love this poem. it made me cry cuz of what i'm going through. great job. 5/5

Wow once again you leave me struck with aww ... i just love your style great timeing and writeing skill

That was a great poem, the flow was very nice there was only part that threw me off a tad
"Each day passes and it does get harder to pretend"
Perhaps if you removed the does??? Only a suggestion though, this was a very poetic write! Good job :)

Great poem-i really enjoyed reading it! 5/5 keep writing!

2 line comment. Good job, 5/5 (is that 2 or 1? lol)

I liked it, sad but good

Very good poem. I can really relate to this poem. Putting up a wall so that you can never be hurt again, by anyone.

Amazing...I loved this poem...You could not only feel the emotion...but you got a picture...or well at least i did...Nice job...
Emma 5/5

Aww wow this is so sad, and sadly I could relate to this. With every word you said I felt like it was mysel. The flow was very nice and it gave the poem a sense of a powerful background. Keep up your wonderful work. God bless you. xxx

I can relate to this alot, it was great!!! It hurts to feel that way tho...but i guess it's things like that, that gets us through everything else!! Good job

Wow.. this poem just blew me away. It was filled with so much emotion and seemed so sincere. It definitely left an impression on me. I loved the way you described yourself as unreachable, and the last line really brought the whole poem together and was the perfect way to end it. Great job on this! 5/5*

Nice poem,5/5